Slightly better, but still "no cigar" -- Some of the problems are vocabulary, but others are apparently confusion re: the verbs - which tense is appropriate - and when to use "on" instead of "nous"
Freeform Writing Exercise B1
Hi Carol. The tenses will come with practice (but will always be challenging). As for “nous” and “on”, we could have used either form throughout this exercise - they would have meant exactly the same - but right at the beginning of the exercise they asked us to use “on” for the whole story. Keep going, and the progress will come!
Thank you.....,I just have to have faith!
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