"Le temps qu'il ait pris son déjeuner, tu peux prendre une douche."

chris w.C1Kwiziq Q&A regular contributor

"Le temps qu'il ait pris son déjeuner, tu peux prendre une douche."

The English translation of this ' By the time he's had his lunch, you can have a shower' is agreed by 50 of my fb friends to be ungrammatical and not something an english person would say. The wrong answer - the time it takes him to have lunch, you could have a shower, is much more what we would say, although we'd say 'In the time..'  and you might say'In the time it takes him to have lunch, you can have a shower' although could is better. Could someone please pay attention to this. It feels wrong consistently having to select a fake English answer.

Asked 3 years ago
Jim J.C1 Kwiziq Q&A super contributor

Hi Chris,

Your headline text would translate to "By the time he had taken his lunch, you can (be able to) take a shower". What you have translated is inaccurate (Deepl?) and misleading in trying to make your point.

Perhaps your point would attract a different statistic if you were to try again with a more accurate translation.

Jim

Chris W.C1 Kwiziq Q&A super contributor

Agreed with Jim's reply. Your suggested translation is off the mark because it says that taking a shower takes place while he is having lunch. The French use of the subjonctif passé makes a point in saying that you can take a shower once he has finished with his lunch.

 

chris w.C1Kwiziq Q&A regular contributor

Hi Jim, my french text and the translation are exact copies of the questions and answer on the KWIZ.

Jim J.C1 Kwiziq Q&A super contributor

Hi Chris,

OK, fair enough!     So the answer is to flag your point up with the help desk so that your point can be reviewed by them and a possible amendment made to the lesson for the benefit of all future users.

Bonne journée

Jim

Chris W.C1 Kwiziq Q&A super contributor

@Chris: I'd be interested in a response from one of the ladies of the kwiziq team. My understanding is that the subjonctif passé is used when one action has definitely ended before the other one started. That would preclude having lunch while he is having a shower and finishing the shower by the time he finishes lunch. Rather, I understand it as that you can have your shower by the time he has finished lunch.

chris w.C1Kwiziq Q&A regular contributor

Chris: 'you can have your shower by the time he has finished lunch'. is not grammatical english. 'you could have' would work, though.

Chris W.C1 Kwiziq Q&A super contributor

@Chris: It is grammatically correct alright but very ambiguous not good style. However, what I'm trying to say is that the French sentence with the past subjunctive, in my understanding, says something quite different from what you mention. It means that you can start showering once he has finished his lunch. And not that you have to be finished with your shower before he finishes his lunch. On that, though, I'd love some confirmation of the natives.

chris w.C1Kwiziq Q&A regular contributor

'you can start showering once he has finished his lunch' is, as you suggest, grammatical and sensible. But it's not the translation given by Kwiziq. Le temps que, is translated as 'By the time '. which in English is not at all the same as 'Once' 'Once', in English, means 'after'. 'By the time' x happens, is always followed by a verb in the past, because by the time means in the time that will have passed...x will have , could have , happened.

Anne D.C1Kwiziq Q&A regular contributor

I’d be interested in a Team Member’s response to Chris’s interesting question. Setting aside the "ait pris" I also don’t think that "By the time he's had his lunch, you can have a shower." is grammatically concordant in English. You could say - 

when/after he’s had his lunch you can have a shower 

by the time he’s had his lunch you could have had a shower or

by the time he’s had his lunch you will be….


chris w. asked:

"Le temps qu'il ait pris son déjeuner, tu peux prendre une douche."

The English translation of this ' By the time he's had his lunch, you can have a shower' is agreed by 50 of my fb friends to be ungrammatical and not something an english person would say. The wrong answer - the time it takes him to have lunch, you could have a shower, is much more what we would say, although we'd say 'In the time..'  and you might say'In the time it takes him to have lunch, you can have a shower' although could is better. Could someone please pay attention to this. It feels wrong consistently having to select a fake English answer.

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