In the first sentence, could it be où rather than quand, referring back to the 5:45 specified? If not, is it because où is only a restrictive relative, or something else?
Freeform Writing Exercise B2
Monday 14th October at 5.45 when the local baker Maryse Lépine arrived ...
No, où would be incorrect here.
Have written the text in English deliberately not to give you the French !
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